Jeremy froze. It was so horribly similar to that other night - the night he’d seen the demon slit his beloved’s throat. He battled with the panic that rose in him, struggling for control. He snuck toward the pair, his eyes glued to Anna’s prone body. She lay on top of a grave, her beautiful face in the shadow of the headstone. It wasn’t until he was close enough to smell the stink of the demon that he saw the dark stain that marred the far side of her dress. It was blood - her blood - and it was spilling rapidly from a wound her side in a way that made Jeremy’s breath seize in his lungs.
“No - “ His voice sounded strangled. Airless.
The demon turned to face Jeremy, an amused disdain dancing in the fire of his eyes. He laughed. It was a short, bitter sound.
“Well, you’ve arrived at the last possible second. There’s nothing to be done, of course. She’ll move out of this incarnation any moment now, but if you’re quick, there might be time to say goodbye. Again. Go ahead.” The demon raised a knife that seemed to materialize in his hand. It’s edge shone red with blood, but without even bothering to wipe it, the demon started to clean beneath his broken fingernails with the tip, utterly unconcerned by the despair in front of him.
Jeremy dropped to his knees, crawling the last few feet to Anna’s side. He reached out a shaking hand and brushed the hair from her forehead. With a finger, he gently traced the shape of her unnaturally cold lips.
“Oh, my love,” his whispered. “Why?”
He turned to the demon, the question still on his lips. “Why?” he demanded. “It wasn’t enough to kill her once?”
The demon shrugged. “What good was she to me after that? Your . . .kind. . . . claimed her as their own.” The fire in his eyes became redder, hotter. “Which made it all the more complicated to make her mine. Finally and eternallymine.” He glanced down at Anna’s bleeding form. “With her as a vampire, I need not just my blood, but the blood of another vampire to create my little demon companion.Your blood will make it that much sweeter - the strength of the bond you shared with her still lurks in her veins. It will mingle with mine, strengthening her when she transforms.” He grinned. “She’ll be a marvelous companion to me. Now. Are you going to give me your arm willingly, or shall I cut you by force?”
Jeremy’s head swam. He’d thought he’d lost Anna forever, but he hadn’t. Not yet, at least, but if he couldn’t find some sort of solution, she really would slip though his fingers. His nightmare would come true. Again.
Be sure to go to Good Books and Good Wine TOMORROW (Friday) for the final chapter in this story, written by Heather Brewer here http://www.goodbooksandgoodwine.com/
Don't miss the part 12 of Story 2 on Reading Teen http://www.readingteen.net/ by Jennifer Murgia
I really can't predict how this story could end. Surely not a happy end, in my opinion.
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Poor Anna! Poor Jeremy! Can't wait to see what more angst is in store for them.
ReplyDeleteWhy can't they just be together?? So much suffering for Jeremy this sucks! But it's such a great story!!
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My Bloody Fairy Tale
If the demon has Jeremy's blood and a vampire's blood can ressurect someone that vampire killed, why don't the demon bring back his own girl and turn her into a demon like he intends to do with Anna? He'd be happier don't you think? And Jeremy and Anna could be together too! =)
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Oops, I've doubled the wrong letter: "resurrect"... Confusions with Portuguese.. =)
ReplyDeleteThere dosen't seem to be a way for them to live together. I sure hope they figure out how to though!
ReplyDeleteGreat story!!!
ReplyDeleteWhat a great story so far. Hope they end up together!
ReplyDeleteI can't wait to find out how it all ends!
ReplyDeleteOh! I can't wait to read the final part!
ReplyDeleteThis one is my favorite part. It's got the love, the action, the revenge, the heartache, all in one. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteCan't wait to read the next part.
so the demon wants the girl the vampire wants the girl but the girl wants the vampire?
ReplyDeleteSo excited for the last part!!! Gah, how will it all end?!
ReplyDeleteOh how horrible, cant wait to see how it turns out.
ReplyDeletePoor Anna, she has gone through so much. Hope Jeremy can save her.
ReplyDeleteHopefully this has a happy ending :) I wish it could be longer lol
ReplyDeleteI feel so bad for Jeremy. I hope this ends well.
ReplyDeleteI really hope Jeremy can save Anna and maybe painfully destroy the demon!
ReplyDeleteI hope Jeremy can save her! Anna's gone through so much! I can't wait to read the last part!
ReplyDeletewow!!! this story is really great! i hope jeremy can save anna and they can be together again. i so can't wait to see how it ends tomorrow!!
ReplyDeleteOh..I'm not sure how this will end..I'm one for happy endings but this isnt looking good..
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baby_blackroze@yahoo.com
Great story
Hopefully there's a happy ending...
ReplyDeleteHe can't lose her! It just can't happen!
ReplyDeleteI swear this story just keeps on surprising me. My fingers are crossed that Jeremy figures out a way to save Anna :D
ReplyDeleteIt all ends tomorrow. And I have to wait until then to know what happens. *sigh*
ReplyDeleteI can't believe it poor Anna can't wait to see how it ends. What a really great story I found myself wanting more!
ReplyDeleteoh my gosh I cannot wait to see what happens next!
ReplyDeleteMan, this couple just can't catch a break! Hopefully with the next chapter everything will work out!
ReplyDeleteCome on Jeremy! Give me a happy ending.
ReplyDeleteLol, I love basically the demon saying "I WILL CUT YOU!" I wonder how Jeremy will fix this situation? I hope they end up together!
ReplyDeleteOoh, come on Jeremy! You can figure something out...
ReplyDeleteSolution?? What solution? don't stop there.
ReplyDeleteAh, so that's the demon's motive.
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I hope he can save her! Can't wait for the final part.
ReplyDeleteI want Jeremy and Anna to be together! The final part is next!
ReplyDeleteI can't get a good read and predict where this is going...it's exciting!
ReplyDeletePoor Jeremy!:(
ReplyDeleteGreat story!
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Only one more part left!
ReplyDeleteI'm loving this!
ReplyDeleteI can't wait to see how this all ends
ReplyDeleteAhhh! One more piece...how will it end?!
ReplyDeleteOh my god! I can´t wait for read the last part!
ReplyDeleteAW! I really hope that things end happily for Anna and Jeremy! It's not looking good right now though :(
ReplyDeleteOoh. Poor Jeremy and poor Anna at this point. I wonder how long they've been separated? And all the worse for her, because I bet a part of her had to know...
ReplyDeletePoor Jeremy!
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